Alexander

 My Pinwheel

For my theme with my pinwheel I wanted to send a message that I was trying to get peace. I hope that saying that all wars will end and that we all get along will help. And finally my tape said that I would like among all people. I had a problem that I couldn’t get my pinwheel to stay on the eraser so I had to put it in the metal hole in it. I wish that it would blow more when I blow on it but I can’t loosen it or it will fall apart again. But I taped a pencil to it and I hope that it will not come out while we put them in the ground on the 21st of September for national peace day. If I could do something different I say it would be the pinwheel I would make it a metal pinwheel with accurate circles on it. And next time I would not rush through it the whole time. And finally I would make it a lot bigger so it can stick in the ground and stick out so people can see it from far away. By: Alex Myers 7th Grade