21Brynn

I have improved from the first picture because my buildings are crooked in my before picture. And my after picture my buildings are way straighter than the before. I also Improved on my road. My road is really messy in the before city and my road in the after picture is way better and smooth. The problems I had with my city were the colored pencils. The colored pencils was a bad choice they didn't color all the way through. I should have used crayons instead. I am happy because my city turned out way different then I expected. The road turned out way better. And finally the truck turned out awesome.

//I// //have improved from the first picture because my glove doesn't look like a weird looking glove. And my new picture is way better than what it had looked like in the before picture.The problems I had was that I had to figure out what to do in the background. The background didn't turn out how I thought it would.I am happy with my peace poster because that is not at all how I thought my poster would turn out.//