21Isabel

I have improved a lot on my peace poster. I drew it a lot better and I colored my finished one. Also, I tried my best to make it look good. That is how I improved from my rought draft and my finished peace poster.

One of my problems was figuring out what colors to use. Another problem was to figure out what to draw. Also, I just asked for other peoples opinion on how I should draw, and color it.

I am really proud of my peace poster because I put a lot of time and effort into it. Also, I am proud of how good I did on drawing it all. I think my poster looks great!

I have improved a lot from my before picture to my after picture. In my before picture I did not go to the vanishing point (because i didn't know about vanishing points at that time), and I didn't color my city. Also, I filled in my after city with more buildings, a good road, a sidewalk, and a good sky. That is how I improved from my before and after city.

One of my problems was to figure out what color to color my buildings, and i solved that problem by choosing a brighter color and having a bright city, except for my road. Another problem I had was knowing what to name my buildings. It is like you are in a dream or a little picture book because a few of those buildings are not real. Those were a few problems I had with my before and after cities.

I am pretty happy with my new and improved city because I took a lot of time on it and put a lot of effort into it. My before city not so much because there is no vanishing point lines and the road does not look like a real road. I am very proud of my work.